Imagine the wind blowing through your hair and the sun softly kissing your face. A radiance forms around you and slowly you begin to dance along the shoreline. One by one, your feet begin to create patterns and shapes beneath you. Without even realizing it, you have created words…
In life, not many stop to think about the small substances that affect our everyday lives. Down by the shore, the sand is a source of life for thousands of organisms. Most of the organisms that depend on it, gravitate towards the shoreline before they are even born, such as sea turtles. To them, their relationship to the sand is natural, organic.
More often than not, this is how writers decide what to put on the page; it is their source of inspiration. For myself, my best writing comes naturally. It is as if the moment I set my pen on the page it takes a life of its own. My pen begins to dance and twirl and create beautiful lines out of simple words.
Over the course of this semester, hopefully beyond, I intend to share the words I create while dancing in the sand. As a writer, I acknowledge the power a simple word has and the need to choose the best ones. However, sometimes the best words choose us.
Writing should be enjoyable. So, let’s all go out and dance amongst the gains of sand…
Rita Cinquemani. Freshman at Hofstra University. Shark lover.

Hi Rita!
First off, I just want to say I really enjoyed reading your “About Me” page! Your descriptions of being at the beach put that very image in my mind as if I were at the beach right now. I also really liked how you described yourself as a writer because you seem to have a really good grasp of how you see yourself now. Honestly, I don’t know if you need to improve your “About Me” section. Its well written as it is now. Have you blogged before? because your blog looks really nice! keep up the good work!
-Ricky
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Hey Rita,
Your “About Me” is wonderful. I love how you started with a broad topic, the beach, but then related it not only to yourself, but to your writing. You seem to be a very diligent writer and pick words wisely. The only suggestion I have for this page is to add more about your actual style of writing. You have told us what you wish to accomplish by writing, but what environment do you like to write in? Do you enjoy being provided with a structure and topic for writing or do you prefer free writing? But this is an amazing page and I am confident you will do well with blogging.
Ryan S.
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Thank you so much for this areiclt, it saved me time!
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